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She lays in the snow

She lies in the snow
Naked
Thinking that maybe the pain will subside
And she'll go numb
But she can't help but shake
Not with chill
But with sorrow
She loves him
She hates him
She needs him
She can't live without him
She screams
And shivers
Knowing that she'll die there
In that blood stained snow
But she doesn't care
Cause she doesn't know what love is
And no one bothered to show her what it was
Bleeding
She lays there
Trying to piece together her broken stone heart
With no success
She goes numb
She can't feel her body
But she can feel her pain
She lies there crying
She'd rather die
Her wings are torn
She can't get up
And get away
She lies there
And fades away
And it is there
That she dies
Her body turns to stone
Her face full of sorrow
Frozen there for eternity
Until someone's warmth
Awakens her from the dead
And pulls her back to life
And back to the pain
Why?
Because they wanted to hurt her more?
Torture her?
Or...
...Because they loved her...?
She looks up
And her eyes meet his
And she dies there
In his arms
Knowing what love is...

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  • Celticmoon
    October 24, 2007
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    Thank you for taking the time enter and good luck to you!


  • DeadlyTurnip
    August 17, 2007
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    This is such a sad, emotional poem. Thank you for entering such a great write.