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Only A Renegade

Missing image
In the shadows of memory,
I hear melodious dischord
as I try to escape the roundabout of living.
Yet, every turn arrests my flight
as I become further disconnected and anxious.
The screeching resonance of disharmony
perpetually exercises it's grasp on my sanity.
The 'in and out' of cacophany's past
ceaselessly reminds me...


I am but a fearful renegade...






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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 14, 2007

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    Such a deeply profound piece of writing. Clear and emotion driven. Thanks for sharing... x Butterfly.


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    February 13, 2007

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    This poem was very well done. I studied this picture but the inspiration did not come. I think your interpretation is interesting and insightful. Good luck in this contest.


  • cactus thorn
    February 13, 2007

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    This is such a dramatic poem filled with (for me) frustration and discontent.

    I enjoyed reading it and I've read it over and over. Each time feeling something different.

    You have a very creative way with words.
    "I hear melodious dischord" what an image.

    Thanks.