My dreams revolve inside me,
as the music slowly plays.
Distempered thoughts
and disjointed images,
mangle reality in my head.
Animals and objects,
trapse restless in this hollow.
Twisting darkness into a dance,
that I can never end.
Round and round it goes.
A contest entry
- within words by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended February 14, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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So deeply dark and sincerely profound. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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The reality in this piece speaks volumes to any who can understand how we go on, around and around on this carosel called life. Imitating what we have seen, desiring more, but closing our minds to allow the twisted beauty we already have achieved. Well done my friend. Well done.
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