Stardust ponies traverse the night,
while Peter leaps and planets dance
around the half-note sun.
The moon enpedestals a little man
while flights of fancy birddog Mars.
And still the sun plays on,
Her music cosmic in its breadth.
©2007
12-13-2007
Author notes
Written for the contest: within words 10 lines or less
by Butterflydreams http://allpoetry.com/contest/2339652
A contest entry
- within words by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended February 14, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A critical criticism invited.
Comments
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Hi lovely write, congratulations, I smiled when saw you prtrayed the sun as female.all the best, Di
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Thank you for commenting. And, it looks like a woman, to me.
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