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I Can't Help

I can't help these feelings of abandonment
Since the day you left me
I've cried out for my savior
But your no where to be found
I don't understand why you left me
And now I fear she'll leave me too
Even as I hold her in my arms
And she tells me she loves me
I can't help crying out
Please come back
And bring your saving grace
Bring peace back into my soul
I can't help these feelings of despair
Since the day you left me
My hearts been chocked
And my mind is failing
My spirits week
And I can't find the will to go on
Please come back
And calm my restless heart
And bring order to the chaos in my mind

Author notes

I was going back through my poems and took a look a this one...I'm done some work on it, but I don't think there is anything for me to do.

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