What I am going to say
When she asks me today
If I forgive her or not?
If I do not...
who will play with my hair tonight?
For sure,
tomorrow she will get these words
And we will feed them to the fire ...together
Hey you , playing with the keyboards,
I really love her , ask her can't she feel it
when we kiss?
Ask her
for the stories that we made to make it here:
We had no fear.
We broke a lot of rules,
With out using any tools
Together we have never been afraid
A trail of bread crumbs on the floor
reminds me of
the bread we ate last night
with our little puppies
Are you still asking me to forgive you?
The river can't change his own way
I said forever, not only for one day
I can't not forgive you.
Because
I love you
A contest entry
- ~Love Me Tender~ by -Ink Artist-.
525 points, ended February 16, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Tota,
You always take my breath away. How is it that you are so good at everything you do?
When I read this it brought tears to my eyes. I dont know how I got lucky enough to have your love, but I thank God for it every day.
I love you! And Happy Valentines Day.
Sarah -
Interesting narrative. The question of forgiveness is always such a hard one to answer. I hope for you that this is just a fictional writing and you're not facing that dilemma personally. Thanks for your entry and good luck!
~Lori
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