There's a soul out there that needs a mate
Who's done by hard when comes to fate
Her mind is sharp, but not her tongue
..........???
(I must be tired, just lost my pun ...)
But not in jest, and said as peer
This woman's fine, her place in here
Has earned respect and feelings too
She be a catch, and it could be you!
There's a soul out there that needs a mate
So get to work ... and don't be LATE!!
Author notes
This was written especially for Trista to start off her contest ... and I have already disqualified myself okay!!!
A contest entry
- Soul Mates by trista.
500 points, ended March 1, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh Nice one.....
What a beautiful deed to do something like this as a prelude to a contest! Admirable
M proud of you Bro'
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Hi Steve,
I'm getting ready to judge this (finally lol) but wanted to swing by and read the poem that started them all off before I wrap everything up. Thank you once again. I know you understand the meaning of soul mates very well.
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Cute, enjoyable...uplifting...
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this is so cute,
very enjoyable
great rhyme and great flow.
you really shouldn't have disqualified your self because this is really rather good and something different for a change.
this piece made me smile, which has been hard for me to do lately, so i thank you for that.
manyblessings2u & yours always
joyce
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Very Good
You tell her
Like your humor a lot
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LOL I love the rhyme in this one and the loss of the pun in the first stanza... sensational write here, great job, well done
Karen -
I like the line "..........???". It says nothing but adds so much to this poem. You've done a lovely job of describing a soul mate with this piece. Well Done
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This is a WONDERFUL piece to start out my contest, and I thank you for writing it for me. It brought a huge smile to my face. As for a sharp tongue...I can honestly say it takes a LOT of sharpening by someone else before it lashes out.
To quote a great saying, "I'm a lover, not a fighter."
TY Hon, and take care!
Much love,
~J.
P.S. Since you have disqualified yourself from the contest, the least I can do is applaud!
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Thanks, and your wishes are appreciated
I'm glad you enjoyed it ... she is worth the effort. -
Anyone reading Mykel would know ...
That you indeed are a lover not a fighter mate!
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I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, well done! I am glad I read it. thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work. Best of wishes to you. good luck in all that you do....peace always in all ways
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i really like this it was well wrote this was a very intereasting piece i liked it very much so well done well done
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This kinda moves along with ease has a real good feel with a nice little rhyme. Underneath the words a smile I see support and friendship deep. I see you have disqualifed this poem and that speaks volumes and I am sure trista will appreciate your efforts.Thank you for the pleasure of this read
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