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The Ten Percenter

They say we're Ten percenters
When it comes to brains
We use so very little
When will it all change

If we could use just twenty
We could talk without speach
Maybe read each others minds
Elevate ourself

At Thirty or even forty
We could move objects with out mind
Heal ourself and maybe even fly

As it goes on who know
What we are capible of
Becoming bodies of light
Make the universe our home

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What can we accomplish if we could use all our brains, I might even be able to spell. Just think of the power we hold inside of us, We can move mountains.

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  • blur
    February 16, 2007

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    interesting write, but unfortunately (or fortunately..lol) based on a myth


    http://www.snopes.com/science/stats/10percnt.htm


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    February 15, 2007

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    Ahh.. This is very interesting my friend! I love the idea of using more of our brain to accomplish what we now, cannot. Very good imagination!!! Great, ?great job!!!!!!!!GBY

    Silver


  • Inside and out
    February 15, 2007
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    You have obviously used more than 10% of your brain writing this poem. It is thoughtful and thought provoking. You refer to your spelling...spell check is available and only requires a button...
    Well stated and well written.


  • debilynn gold member
    February 13, 2007

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    what a thought provoking write! interesting concepts you have penned. i like this. keep writing. God bless you


  • honey bear
    February 13, 2007

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    this is a great concept but i am afraid it wouldnt work for me as i think i would have to actualy own a full brain to be able to use a full brain ha ha ha


  • gullionmar
    February 13, 2007
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    very nice


  • blueyez
    February 13, 2007
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    I wish I could use that one part of my brain that makes that one thing go um you know!........... lol this was an amazing thought provoking write! Wouldn't it be amazing if we were capable of using more brain power?

  • June-bug
    February 13, 2007

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    excellent

    Wonderful, and you are so right, if we ever start to use the power of our own minds who knows what we could accomplish. This is words for thought and reflection.

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