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I Was the One

I was the one that you could have talked to about ANYTHING.
I was the one that you had tons of inside jokes with,
I was the one that still remembers every single one.
I was the one that bragged about you to all my friends.
I was the one that really listened to you.
I was the one that remembered every little detail about you.
I was the one that introduced you to my friends as my BOYFRIEND.
I was the one that didn’t care about the girls you hung out with.
I was the one that helped you through the problems you had.
I was the one that wrote endless amounts of poems about you.
I was the one that professed my love for you everyday.
I was the one that told you, you were perfect, even when no one can be.
I was the one that never thought you could do anything wrong.
I was the one that forgave you, even when you did.
I was the one that never let you get hurt.
I was the one that tried to get you outta trouble.
I was the one that wanted you to think of education first, before me.
I was the one that woke up every morning with a smile because
I was the one that you were with not anyone else.
I was the one that spent hours upon hours on the phone with you.
I was the one that loved it when you kissed me on the phone.
I'm the one that misses that sound every minute of everyday.
I'm the one that cant get you outta my mind, no matter how hard I try.


I was the one that really wanted to be friends after we broke up…
And I'm still the girl who told you she will ALWAYS love you...

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i have writers block so if it sucks...sorry =[

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  • AnDrEa002
    April 23, 2007
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    i know how u feel, i can really realte 2 dis poem, i was his 'one' too, or so i thought


  • Shel5
    March 18, 2007

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    awwww kim. this is so sweet. this is a good poem. it shows how much you love michael. i like this one. its good.


  • HannaBanana
    March 1, 2007

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    I love This poem....Its so Real-Life....Youcan really get your point across, And It make you think. Thanks for sharing


  • XTeenagexTragedyX
    February 24, 2007
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    Outstanding

    Wow..I love this.I can relate to it..Its hard to get through a brake up when you truly love the person.

    "I was the one that really wanted to be friends after we broke up…
    And I'm still the girl who told you she will ALWAYS love you..."
    My favorite lines.
    Awesome job!


  • RazorbladeKissCasel
    February 23, 2007

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    I love this

    I love this write..I know how tough it is to go through a breakup...especeially when you love them...just remember youre not the only one going through this pain right now...I to am going through the same thing...and it happened over 2 monthes ago...but i still love him...just like i said i would...*sigh*...*tear*


  • night sky mystery
    February 23, 2007

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    aw this is really good. i can understand what you are feeling and i kno how frustrating and upsetting it can be.i hope you feel better letting it out through this poem.

    ~bEb~


  • Teomni Zelitel
    February 22, 2007

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    aw hun this was really good. i kno how badly it sucks to go through a breakup with some one you really care about. but its good to let out. good write.


  • The Life Led
    February 13, 2007

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    Aw it doesnt suck, it is actually kinda cute. How you repeated the title with all the things you guys did.

    Ty

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