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Your game called life.

Ive been fighting a never ending battle.
I fought for so long.
But I guess I wasnt strong enough.
I guess I wasnt so tough.

It's been hard and long.
I just wish I could belong.

I really did try,
but the urge to die
was over taking me.
I just wish you would see,
that I was in pain,
and couldnt win this game.

I slipped
and I'm sorry.
I made two deep slices
going down the lane,
tryin to end the game.

tomorrow it will grow worse.
There will be more.
my life is a curse.
my love is a bore
tommorow it will be harder
the scars will grow deeper
and life just feels cheaper.





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  • Pleasantly Insane
    February 13, 2007

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    Amazing

    I love it! It's very good. Are you okay? If you need to talk then just message me...k? I love this poem though. :-)


  • Broken Machine
    February 13, 2007

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    Awwwww. I care about you and I'm here if you ever need to talk! I love this poem. I can totally relate!