Feeling your kiss
I open my eyes
Feeling you there
Between my thighs
Your fingertips
Against my skin
Caressing me slow
Before sliding in
Moving above me
Kissing my frame
Teasing me
My body you claim
Feeling your breath
Upon my neck
Making me ache
Within a split sec
Passionate fire burning
Taking me higher
Entering slowly
Building that fire
Knowing I’m close
You hold me near
Words of love
You say in my ear
Good Morning Beautiful
I hear you say
A perfect start
To a wonderful day
Author notes
#5C
A contest entry
- ♥I Can Love You Like That ♥ ~Erotic Valentines Day Contest~ by Angel With No Halo.
600 points, ended February 13, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre Write Contest by SensualWhispers.
615 points, ended March 15, 2007, 100 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oh my goodness......
........... dang this is hot and good. It's sensual, erotic, sweet, and loving all rolled into one. I really like this one. Excellent write. Thank you for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. Kassie -
cool... now this was a nice steamy one... i love steamy ones... wishing you well in the contest
cheers
Jen -
very nicely written
a nice write you have penned here glad to see you still writting.
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I am glad you liked it... Thank you for the comment and the applause. I really appreciate it.
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Very hot valentine write wicked, nice descriptions and oh yes that love in the morning is sometimes even better then the night before. Beautifully done thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Now this is worth waking up to. Very good write. Keep it up, and good luck in the contest.
**Master Ktulu**
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And a fantastic Happy Valentine's Day to you dearest! this is wonderful! I love it!
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What a good morning, you have written a wonderful poem here if only I could have a good morning like this
Thank you for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
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this is heated, you know i think my fever just got hotter, you did a great job on this i mean that wow, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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This is beautifully done! Quite a pic you have here!Thanks for your entry and good luck to you with it in our contest!
Jeremy0826
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