You with your pussy eyes
and large scratching pole
that I impale myself upon;
A Tom Cat covered in latex,
I gag and swallow
choking on liquid dreams;
In the backseat of cars,
with leather
gripping my ass, tightly;
The smell of piss and vinegar,
filling my nostrils
from your past escapades;
Of two bit whores,
gyrating and undulating
for whore-masters like you;
As the engine roars
I stuff your silky head
into exhausted thighs,
suffocating the blood that flows
to that purple pumping vein;
I pay the price
in false moans of satisfaction,
causing you to purr louder
in premature elation.
Author notes
By Cupcrazy
This piece inspired by:
Anne Sexton
"Buying The Whore"
~~~
You are the roast beef I have purchased
and I stuff you with my very own onion.
You are a boat I have rented by the hour
and I steer you with my rage until you run aground.
You are a glass that I have paid to shatter
and I swallow the pieces down with my spit.
You are the grate I warm my trembling hands on,
searing the flesh until it's nice and juicy.
You stink like my Mama under your bra
and I vomit into your hand like a jackpot
its cold hard quarters.
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- -x-Whore-x- by xxRainbowDawnxx.
550 points, ended June 20, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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so life is not a fairytale for your character here... you could do one with this turned around and have the guy a gigolo that your character rented... a whore's revenge?
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Anthology Worthy!
Great Author Selection. Great Adaptation of her poem and style. You would do Anne Sexton Proud. I love it!
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Very raw. Rich in metaphors and therefore it is less vulgar and disgusting... But at the same time if you know how to take the metaphors they are just as degrading and disgusting as anything else you may think of. I liked this piece, it had truth and bitterness to it and the fact this is probably how someone in that line of business would thing or act, just to get the cash.
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Wow, this was rather... uh.... explicit. LOL. Honestly, I immediately didn't know wether to be offended or a little bit turned on. lmao. Perhaps the offense IS what appealed to me about it. It's an unapologetic approach to poetry that I see so little of these days, and this would be a fantastic performance piece. That kind of shocking poem that isn't written to be shocking, but to be honest, even brutally so. I liked it (and adore the inspiration piece behind it, I must say- great tastes you've got
) The "premature elation" was a nice little dig. Sadly, too many people can relate to that! lo
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Wonderful
Once again you showed how much you are such a master on some many poems. This was a great version of the original.
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weird
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