Odie, my dear Odie
where for art though.
I have a prank
which dawns in the west
Of John's closet
Tis a shoe
for you
to chew
Nay, the new pair
there
my canine comerade
with little behind thine eye
You are but a fish
in the Barell of my world.
B.L.House 2007
A contest entry
- Garfield by AliceinPoetryLand.
700 points, ended February 14, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Too cute. I really loved this. You made me giggle and everyone could use a laugh or two. Great job.
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Thank you so much for this lovely entry and good luck in my contest
Gaylene
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Good one! The more ancient language was a nice touch. Hehe, poor Odie. It's a good thing he's so stupid otherwise I don't think he'd be so forgiving. Well done, good luck in the contest!
Commander
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Thank you David
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Cute little ditty this is, sweetie!
Loved it! All the best to you! -
A very amusing piece. Gave me a smile.
Well done!
Good luck in the contest.
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