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Creeper

i really think i am a creeper
for i cant get my eye off my teacher
for his face is so roughly shaven,
and his body just gives me a craving

its hard not to stare
not having him gives my heart a tear
his arms so buff, they look so bold
but in those arms, another woman he holds.

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  • cvillelisa
    February 14, 2007

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    I might be missing it -- but where is the acrostic?

    Happy Valentine's Day to you anyhow and thanks for the creepy poem.

    Lisa


  • Tweedle Dee
    February 13, 2007

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    LOL kinda creepy! i dunno if I've written one bout a stalker before... can't say I ever thought about so unlike you.... LOL i'm kidding. I Liked it! I thought it was pretty darn interesting if you ask me. the contest is pretty darn interesting anyways. ok well... YOU HAVE A GOOD DAY

    Miss Hello