I lay underneath the willow’s tear
Sky unbound above
My dog sleeps near
there’s naught to hear
and at last I know true love
For all a man needs is
a dog and some trees
to be content for the years to come
A contest entry
- Pay it forward please :) by little-hug.
900 points, ended April 7, 2007, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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This reminds me of some book - I can't really remember the name of it - a very love story type thing. Gosh, can't remember.
This poem is short but says alot compared to it's length so you've done a good job there. And for that book name? Still can't remember, sorry. -
WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!
I loved this!! Your imagry was brilliant and I thought you did a great job overall. Thank you for this great piece, and I do hope that you enjoy your time here. Feel free to ask any questions as I am a greeter.
Despair
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