My heart is burning for your love,
I don't undertand
this strong feeling.
Everytime i see you
with another person,
I cry inside.
But i know
this could never happen.
Why would it?
We are not meant to be.
But that does not
stop me from wanting you,
from loving you,
from crying in a corner,
and waiting
For you.
A contest entry
- Valentine Day (ages 8-15) by kim5519.
550 points, ended February 15, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I need an A.P. Family by Blackchlid.
375 points, ended March 9, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anti Valentine by Memoirs of a Girl.
385 points, ended February 20, 2007, 22 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your prewrites!!!!! by Nereida Nightshade.
450 points, ended February 19, 2007, 101 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
wotya think?
Comments
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This is really good! I did like it... so many can relate to wanting someone and loving them so much and not ever being able to have them... I definately can. Rock on! xoxo Meg
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so sad. It makes me want to cry. It's soo good. One suggestion would be to change the backround or the font color because I can't read the poem unless I highlight the whole thing. Anyway, it is a really good, sad poem. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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you did not put your option or "angel" in your comment box. im sorry. i did not read it. you are dq from the contes. im verry sorry but you did not fallow my rules.
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Awww. Wanting something we cant have. it happens so many times. Why I don't know. It sort of hard to read with that background. And don't forget to put the option in the authors box. Good luck in the contest.
Kim -
wow very nice! i really liked it you did a great job! it is kinda sad... but its okay is good!you did a great job and i really like this poem!
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Welcome to AP
When the heart knows what it wants, it won't settle for anything or anyone else! Very well done! Thank you for sharing and welcome to allpoetry!
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