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An Angel

Cold wet grass - A Summer night
- A swift breeze flying by
- - Don't know how
- - Don't know when
- Just know that it's so
An Angel blessed me with her wings
- Some believe in Miracles
- - Some believe in Dreams
- - A little goes a long way
- When you don't see it all the time
I wasn't alone - I can't say how
- Though I saw no one around
- - Electricity was in the air
- - Magic in my veins
- A cold shiver down my spine
An Angel blessed me with her wings

Author notes

One magical night.
Thank the Goddess.
Blessed Be.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 13, 2007

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    you know there are times when i feel the same way, i can't explain it, but on that what i wanted to say, this is a golden poem, you know i love it, keep it flowing


  • Ryno
    February 12, 2007

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    Enchanting;

    "A cold shiver down my spine"

    well this is exactly what this poem gave me!
    Wonderful usage and great, original form.
    Terrific.

    ~Ryan~