I hate. glittersticks
since I was attacked with them.
Smoking! kills,
even kisses.
My hips want + to be wings.
Ribs protruding? but; still"
comically oversized> in comparison
to: my waste.
Give me space or see me smile,
give me smiles or see me frown.
huge smiley faces are attacking now ah ahh get them away they're eating my skin.
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kazakistan.
A contest entry
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Very interesting...
........ very very very very interesting. I really liked this poem. You've done a fantastic job. thanks for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. Kassie -
this....
was interesting.
but i loved this:
"My hips want + to be wings.
Ribs protruding? but; still"
comically oversized> in comparison
to: my waste."
good luck.
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