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[ i invited you to a party ]

i invited you to a party
you said you cant
you sounded so honest
so i belived you and said
"it's ok.. maybe next time"
i invited you to dinner
you said, you're grandma died
i felt bad and i said
"it's ok.. maybe next time"
i invited you to the football game
you said its your sisters birthday
i was a little confused but i said
"it's ok.. maybe next time"
but now i remember
that on march 3
no one should die
no one shall grow older
so i invited you to the park
just to sit and talk
but you said your grandma died
i said "did'nt she die last week?"
you replyed
no and i lied
"my grandma did'nt die,
my sister did'nt have a birthday..
i just did'nt want to hurt you,
im in love wiht someone else"

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  • in-the-twilight
    February 13, 2007

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    Ouch... see... this is why I hate love! It's not worth this sweetie! Great great write though! Rock on! xoxo meg

  • WintersDarkCherub
    February 13, 2007
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    And this is why love is over rated and stupid

  • The Life Led
    February 12, 2007
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    Aw such a sad write but nicely written.

    Ty

  • The Life Led
    February 12, 2007
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    Aw such a sad write but nicely written.

    ♥Ty


  • Artemis Gem
    February 12, 2007
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    ..interesting-good emotion
    sad, very sad-

    pegleg

  • livingItup
    February 12, 2007

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    awe
    this is sad. to be get heartbroken. i can relate to this. this is beautiful. your talented.

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