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I hate you harder...

I can't bear it when you touch me.
There's something lurking deeper than our love.
I know you despise me.
It's a show for an audience,
When actors come off stage,
Do they still recite?

When no one is watching,

We scream.

I'll shout to you that I love you,

Rage in my voice.

And when you say you hate me,

I know I'll always hate you harder.

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  • Starswhispers silver member
    February 13, 2007
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    A very nice poem I like the opposition love/hate well in tune with the contest (Please do not capitalise letters after a comma). The end is very strong I like this. Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.