A Mystic Waterfall
Waters fall to a clear shallow pool
I sit reflecting in the shaded glade
Once there we lay on a quiet spring day
our hearts at play
my love...I did say
A day and so long gone
as the song of the falling water
rises to my ear... in mystic tones
Once...you were here
Peteskid
A contest entry
- 10 lines........15 minutes by Celticmoon.
300 points, ended February 12, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Short, sweet, sad yet elegant. Your words are soft and speak with a saddneded warmth.
Thanks for entering and good luck! -
Oh this is so sad but so lovely too.
A great write in so few lines.
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thank you
I have seen some writers on AP who do this really well
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Very eloquent and sweet, a poem of desire and longing and well done by you.
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thank you
working on your quick style :') -
thank you
one of your one minute writes
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