Times were so simple
Times were so grand,
Times were amazing
When nothing was bad
Black and White,
Races and religion
Black and White
Good and Bad.
The 1960's were so hard
Iraq is so hard to live in Now
From past to present,
The World has Changed,
Like movies in black and white,
To ours in blinding colors.
Stuck in a world
Where everything is wrong
Stuck in a world
That Never Changed!!!
A contest entry
- Black and white....................... by Starswhispers.
500 points, ended February 15, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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awesome!!!
bin missing ya matty!!! <3 this is awesome it is definetly the typr of thing ms.kohrherr would love haha
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A nice piece I like te way you show the opposition bad/good right /wrong it is short an powerful quite desperate and sad, I wish you would revise the punctuation and capitalisation of the begining of lines. I will read all poems again before and after closing the contrst and judge according to the last version. Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck.
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