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Shooting Stars


Shooting stars are in the sky
you watch as one passes you by
you make a wish, hope it comes tru
i always wait, but they never do.

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  • Celticmoon
    February 12, 2007
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    You kept it short and sweet and to the point. Wishes do come true in time. Sadly that time is never when we want it to be and thus we feel as if we are waiting forever.

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