Within
us lies the art
to create, on a whim,
that beauty which currently lies…
within.
©2007 rous
2-12-2007
Author notes
Written for the contest: 10 lines........15 minutes.
by Celticmoon http://allpoetry.com/contest2339556
A contest entry
- 10 lines........15 minutes by Celticmoon.
300 points, ended February 12, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Absolutely perfect in rythm and ryhme. And so very true.
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Thank you. I am glad that you are enjoying my work. I would avoid the dark stuff, though; quite the bummer.
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I am not one to normally enjoy form poetry all that much but I must give credit where credit is due.......this is lovely. I see perfection created within this piece and it's use of form.
Thansk for entering and good luck!
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Nice
I liked this...except for when you used the word "yo"...it sort of threw me off. Great job, though. I loved the last two lines. Good luck on the contest. I hope you wish me the same...even though I am your opponent. -
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Thank you for commenting. And, pointing out that error. I caught it before I read this, but still, it is nice to see someone actually reading. And, I never look at these as competition, so no opponent. We all win when we are pushed to create.
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