your so far away,
what do i do?
i almost cryed
not being with you.
i know weve never met,
nor layed our eyes on each other,
but its like your always there.
i dont know if we were ment
to meet this way or not,
but ive fell in
love with you flater.
i dont know how,
and i know why,
all i do know is that....
ive fallen for you...
A contest entry
- hey [bro/ken baby] give me your world. by makeout kid.
475 points, ended February 19, 2007, 15 entries
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sweet poem. Lovely write
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thanks
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very nice job! i like it its nice and sweet... and i think you did a great job, i love it all this is a very great poem, keep up the good work
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Heart capturing...
This really touched me... and like NicoteenxQueen said, the last line really hit it...
Never knew someone could like me that much like you do...
Keep up the writing, I love to read what you write
xxx kisses
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i like it.... its something that most can relate to... spelling is a little off,but other than that its really good... i know what you are feeling in this poem.. good write though
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the last line really...hits this home.
good job.
&& good luck, sweetums. -
This is a great piece of work! Very complex and the meaning is deep rooted!
You're wording was phenomenal in this piece and the over-all poem was extraordinary. You also incorporated nice imagery, and it was an extraordinary read.
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