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Scars

Scars:
carmine lines
shackles of paradoxes

Their replications:
in theatres of uncertainties

Slicing so deep -
fissures plunged into
kaleidoscopes of blood
infections whipped
through the scalpel of life
tissues thrown
into enigmas
breathing organs
resting

We wait:
oh so patiently,
in enigmatic universes

Meanwhile,
scars pierce: in my beating heart

I am in the theatre of infinites
collapsed into boulevards of brokeness

Author notes

It's a personal family issue, I am..trying to stay rational and traumatizing myself with music.

And if you know my sister Gothchyld: she is trapped in her emotional state in the other continent.

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    February 13, 2007

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    wow

    Wow this is quite serious. Sorry about your family. I hope things turn out alright. If you want to talk, I'm here. Good poem though. Well expressed and honest.
    Brian


  • gothchyld
    February 12, 2007

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    Thank you, I am slowly recovering from the depression that I had when I heard about what happened. As for you, it seems you have branched out from being a nature poet!