sitting here, loving you
and yet hating you for who you are
for causing the blinding pain
and hurtful selfdoubt
loving your voice
your eyes your touch
the way you smile
and light up my life
but then you lie, then you cheat
and i know i need to escape
but im lost in your eyes
my heart says go
but my legs wont move
loving you
and at the same time wanting to kill you
A contest entry
- Black and white....................... by Starswhispers.
500 points, ended February 15, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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awesome poem you can tell its full of emotion...i like that
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Very nice and simple piece quite powerful, love/hate traveling together in a very hurtful relationship. Here again no punctuation but because of your good lines break and the good thread of the poem it is acceptable. A lovely piece with a strong message.
Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. 
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