They say opposites attract
And I hope to hell it's true
Because there is not one thing
I want to have in common with you.
What did I ever see
In such a whiny little worm?
I hope you choke on heart-shaped candy
Because you really make me squirm.
I guess love really was blind,
I'm glad this year I leave you far far behind.
Author notes
Although opposites do attract and I have attracted many....opposites, I really don't feel this venomous about anyone, luckily.
A contest entry
- Anti - Valentine 10 Lines or Less by Cupcrazy.
400 points, ended February 12, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I HAVE felt this way towards someone, but only because she was cheating on me... I got over it eventually, but I remember feeling this way. You captured it very well, nicely done!!!
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I hope you choke on heart-shaped candy
Ahaha...I love it.
That Sooo Rocks<3
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Thank you!!!! Happy Valentines Day!!
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Hiya Damselflydreams,
If you really did feel this 'venomous' towards somebody, I'm sure you'd do a pretty good job at getting your point across! This is fantastic. Fast paced and full of spite and 'umph', this was a pleasure to read/growl out loud. I loved: 'whiny little worm'... what an excellent insult! Nicely done.
David. x
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Not 'umph' but 'oomph'.
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No, rarely feel this way, but tried to drum up that kind of feeling for the poem, combined some unsavory people in my mind to think about! lol. Thanks for the comments!
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Sentiments well expressed in these lines - one can certainlly understand how you feel about someone here, even if it is just written for a contest. Congrats on the HM -
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Thank you so much for reading and for the comment, luckily I don't have any bad boys in my life right now lol!
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LOL this is great! I am glad you haven't felt this way, but dang it is a awesome write. It was fast and fun. Great flow. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Thanks Jeannie, no, in spite of lack of luck at love many times, (but things are going very well now!!) I never have this feeling. Thanks a bunch for reading and the comment. Happy Valentines Day to you and James.
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great write, nice form and flow and excelelnt sentiment and rhyme, loved it!
Bunny
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Thanks!! Glad yoiu liked it, thanks for the contest and the hm!
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Hahahaha
This is a good one! I really enjoyed reading it.
Lots of emotions and fun!
Thanks for a great laugh!
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