Running to lush, clover filled meadows,
where hope and inspiration lie,
And dreams are three dimensional.
A journey not finished, the meadow, I have yet to find.
Yes, along the way I have stumbled upon,
More then my share of barren, shadow lined valleys.
But...
I continue my journey, I continue to run, and run hard.
The race isn't over until earths checkered flag falls,
At which time, I shall learn my place in this world.
A contest entry
- 10 lines........15 minutes by Celticmoon.
300 points, ended February 12, 2007, 22 entries
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Wow, I so agree we cannot give up on life. We have to try to conquer!!! Excellent imagery and emotion
You have just been Hood-Winked
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This is great. We can't give up in life's race. Your words are inspiring. Continue your good work and write on.
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Wonderfully penned Suzi!
The imagery was great and nice and strong.
Such a nice lil snippet you have penned here.
Thanks for entering and good luck! -
Very well done! The imagery is great and the menaing strong. May we all continue to run, until our time is over.
Bset to you in the contest!
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Oh my dear friend,
This is fantastic!!!!!!! What a great piece this is, the imagery is just as fantastic!!!!!!! I love this!!! Best of luck in the contest! Keep that pen flowing!!!!
Love ya bunches and bunches
Nyetta -
Pretty
I loved this: so pretty and so metaphorical. It was so sweet and tender. I do believe you have talent...though there are a few minor typos. I wish you luck with such a deep poem. I hope you wish me luck too. Oh, god! THIS WAS GREAT!
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