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Hope Endures

Possible disappointment down each pathway
Conceivable paradise along identical roads
Mist blankets distinction
Hope endures
Pushing on through murky air
Uncertainty reigns,

My hearts eyes hold the only crystal view

Consequences unknown
Future undecided
Thoughts now infinitely crucial
Aftermath lies in wait
Lurking in the distance
Enigmatically holding back

My hearts eyes hold the only crystal view

 

 

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 15, 2007
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    very good poem, lovely flow to it.

  • Bob Fox silver member
    March 29, 2007
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    Crystal clear view

    In our worlf of confusion to see clearly is truly anachievement.. But from a distance. Fine write


    • Applehead
      March 29, 2007
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      I think maybe I have worked this out and uncanny it seems too as it is so relivant right now thanks again.

      Ella


    • Applehead
      March 29, 2007
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      Thank you very much. Would you please explain "But from a distance" the meaning escapes lol my apologies

      • Bob Fox silver member
        March 30, 2007
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        I am

        Not sure what you are reffering to my poet friend?

        • Applehead
          March 30, 2007
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          nm LOL i was unsure of your meaning when saying "But from a distance" but its fine i have thought it through and come up with an idea. Of course if you would like to enlighten me with your opinion i would be grateful for that

          • Bob Fox silver member
            March 30, 2007
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            lol

            ok but I do not know much other then my try at poetry

            • Applehead
              March 30, 2007
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              Well my thoughts are that when we take a step back and look at things from a distance things often appear so much clearer. The space between you and the surrounding concern/predicament/situation allows a wider perspective of goings on and choices or options (paths) available. If distant enough your vision may stretch to the ends of each path to a final outcome. (lol sorry im i also enjoy the sister site Allphilosophy )


  • someones-muse
    February 22, 2007

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    loed the photo I got from this poem. i liked thewords you used to put things iliked this line "Pushing on through murky air" that had to have been my favort line in this great poem
    Great write keep it up


    • Applehead
      February 23, 2007
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      Thanks Muse, appreciate your comments will check yours out sometime soon!


  • Jeb
    February 15, 2007
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    Intresting

    This poem is good because it's thought provoking and so often seems so true. I love your line " My Hearts eyes hold the only crystal view" Excellent line! And it's a perfect ending to this poem. Bravo to you!


    • Applehead
      February 15, 2007
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      Thank you thank you, for me that is the most important line, it is the hope in the poem.


  • Blueskywonder
    February 12, 2007

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    What an interstingly thought provoking poem this is, i like the imagery portrayed aswell as t6he mystery in its content/Well done Apple and thankyou for sharing.

    • Applehead
      February 12, 2007

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      Thanks, I tried to keep it vague so it could apply to any decision making time that maybe especially difficult in anyones life.

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