Never could I envision
what Heaven was like.
Till, I looked into your eyes.
Nor could I ever have known true bliss.
Till, I explored every supple curve
of your body.
Why must it be pain-
that lingers?
Since you left me,
with this broken heart.
Author notes
I live Love's Pain
A contest entry
- 10 lines........15 minutes by Celticmoon.
300 points, ended February 12, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awwwww...Mally
I so know this pain sweety. I have to lived with it for much of my life.
Thanks for entering sweety and good luck!
Love
Your
Sultry Moon
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Pain oozes, no gushes, from these few lines - sentiments well expressed in these lines - just that lingers needs to be separated -would look better I think...
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awwwww
so sad and beautiful, Mally
Biggest
Lynda
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