My blood flows red.
My vains run Blue.
I'll drain it all,
If i lose you.
Please tell me what you think
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... I like this one. >.>
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Aww thats sweet. Whoever has is very lucky. Good job and a wonderful write.
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awwww
baby this is sweet... i'd do the same for you m'love
XxoxX all my heart
your Angelic Demon
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Bittersweet
sounds very vengeful, not the way I see you leaving the earth, you are cared for dear friend, i missed you very much.
torrid
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words touch when love covers the heart and the soul!
Yes my friend I heard this clearly!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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this is a beautifully short poem
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short but powerful. i like. way to go
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*whimpers*
bro im always here for you. i love you more than life itself. stay strong for me.
XxoxX love
Me
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Short and sweeeeet! Loving it
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I like the write it is short and too the point.
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I heard this one before... btw vain is the wrong type of vain... this one is spelt vein and I just confused myself... xD
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Short, simple, effctive, sweet and slightly maccabre all in one, nice write. Keep it up and take care x
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