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Awakening Shapes Awakening

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..........................................Effect 

/.........upon
...... our earth

..... everywhere
... .as..g d.is
....in..all and.of
...all./.within. its

.........kiss animated

......... one
..........time
.........cocoon
hibernatingheartanticipating
due.... awakening....dew
lips....empowered....sips
may....taste-paste...way
meet.. or recover....fleet
pre....post ripples....see
..to.....forget......   .is
......out of context
Memory stream continuity
encourages parallel tracks
forwards in out flash backs
remain just.......our optical
conclusions.......or synaptic
illusions..........as retinal
stop-gap............images to
compensate..........sate rate
equating..............unknown
to known............/.as sown
seeds.................chance
blown mock all..../mankind's odd
egoist temporal....misconceptions --->

Author notes


Shape poem spirituality Enjoy text below !


Upon our earth everywhere, as g00d is in all as all, within its one time cocoon hibernating anticipating due awakening, dew lips' empowered sips may taste-paste way, set, rediscover, meet pre/post ripples. See to forget is out of context.

Memory stream continuity encourages parallel tracks
forwards. In/out flashbacks remain just our optical
conclusions, or synaptic illusions, as retinal
stop-gap images, to compensate sate rate, equating unknown to known, as sown seeds, chance blown mock all mankind's odd egoist temporal misconceptions.


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  • Entwining Beauty
    July 9

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    Oh that's simple beautiful form I never had to read the poem in the notes but thank you anyway very beautiful and powerful write good luck

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  • DrunkenRam
    May 3

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    I believe I have seen this one before, I like it very much, the story lines are disconnected with the shape a little, but overall You did very good, I like the Blue Jean look.

  • Harlequin Bunny
    May 3

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    Wow, very impressive shape! White a challenge, I'm sure! I had a hard time doing a stinking kite! haha I can't imagine a whole person!

  • Ringside gold member
    February 6
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    I like the format. Great job. Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.
  • ronnica
    December 7, 2007

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    I agree that this must have taken so long to work. from the rolling eyes to the depth of its message. it is extrremely creative.


  • Night Hope gold member
    December 6, 2007

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    "Upon our earth everywhere, as g00d is in all as all, within its one time cocoon hibernating anticipating due awakening, dew lips' empowered sips"

    You consistently amaze me, my Friend. Please, do continue. This is a wonderful shaped poem, Scribe. Very impressive. I thoroughly enjoy your "Philosophy of and for Life". Ahhh, contentment. Wanda


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    December 6, 2007

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    Great text and concrete image! Very creative, it must have taken hours to work this poem out! Well Done!

    Dennis


  • Ellis gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    Love the human

    "God does not play dice with the Universe." Einstein
    I agree with Albert.

    Why do people want to reverse time or scramble it? There is order on a linear basis mostly.
    -------------

  • michael thomas
    November 29, 2007
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    nice


  • DrunkenRam
    November 29, 2007
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    Love the rolling eyes.
    The context of this piece speaks for itself.


  • samara11278
    October 3, 2007
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    Great job. This is neat.

  • Anjole-Of-The-Artz
    July 26, 2007

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    Question

    I'll write more when I have a chance, but currently I am wondering what your word is. Please type it in the authors comments area. =]

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    • Jonathan ROBIN gold member
      July 26, 2007
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      Reply to Anjole

      The word is in the title i.e. awakening in that the figure is beginning to move forward, both figuratively and literally as can be seen from the arrow at the bottom write and thus the shape of poem shapes the awakening and the awakening shapes the shape

  • Lyre-Bird-
    February 13, 2007

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    Firstly I would like to thank you for entering the contest!!!!!

    Quite a creative poem.... I did however have to read it twice, as it is a little hard grasping all the words, within the dots but they are needed
    I love the shape within the dots... that looks excellent, great effort, I am sure this took some time to line it up..
    well done

    Good luck in the contest
    Tracey

  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    February 13, 2007

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    Very nice

    I liked this a great deal. Very very well done and an excellent message to boot! A pleasure to read and enjoy. ~Pam


  • PerfectImperfection gold member
    February 12, 2007

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    Nice form, a unique endeavor. The flow seemed a bit choppy for me, but all in all it read well with the concept. Good luck in the contest.

  • klassy lassy
    February 12, 2007

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    Delightful! You are so good at this, Jonathan. In a manner, like attracts like, "Awakening Shapes Awakening !!" which I am needing. Optical conclusions equaling synaptic illusions are very much like shape poetry in their manifestation. Mankind's odd egoist temporal preconceptions (misconceptions) must give way to more permanent truths, illusions confusion dissipated in vision clearing. The only way to see through an illusion is to know the facts. Truth I've yet to know, yet I be.

    ~Karen

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