A light of hope beams in the dark
Guiding light for lonely barque.
When wind and gales blow ever faster
Its beacon rays warn of disaster.
Built upon firm, solid rock
That dashing waves can never rock.
Not built on unfirm, shifting sand,
Symbol of God`s love of man
The beams shine brightly, guiding light
In the darkness of our night.
When everything to us seems lost
Our lives upon life`s ocean tossed,
The light will surely guide the way
To happy brighter coming days.
Keep your belief and courage high
To reach life`s harbour safe and dry.
In a list
A contest entry
- Lighthouses by Turtledove.
650 points, ended February 15, 2007, 10 entries
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Wonderful Write
I really like your poem. The message that you bring is true and will speak to the heart of many. Good content, good rhyme and good flow. Good luck in the contest and keep on writing.
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What lovely inspiring words you have penned here. I feel uplifted reading this. I hope you have a winner here. Well done.
Ann
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Well done
Wisdom, poetical, all around nice write. You did very well indeed with this one. Welcome to the finalists! Walt.
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Beautiful
"The light will surely guide the way
To happy brighter coming days."
This piece was beautiful. I really liked theses lines especially. I really felt it. Amazing write.
-Angelmaster576
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So inspirational. Wonderfully written. I loved it. I love your first line and I can picture this so well. I love photography and some day I'd like to capture light through the darkness in the forest. Great job, keep up the good work.
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