I feel your very heartbeat within my chest
even when denied a second of your silky touch,
passion strokes your beauty as painting in my mind,
as my soul is a fireplace only burning with your love.
Dreams of your angel's face has become my breath,
with a well of desire for you flooding my emptiness,
lifting me to soar the clouds of ecstasy,
intoxicating with infatuation's eyes fixed only upon you.
Author notes
For the heart of my life. Who words will never need to be told of the love we share.
A contest entry
- Valentines Day...8 lines only. by Poetic Aphrodite.
425 points, ended February 13, 2007, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your prewrites!!!!! by Nereida Nightshade.
450 points, ended February 19, 2007, 101 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh very pretty and so full of love. Well done thanks for entering!
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Wow,,,that was very beautiful and lovely beyond compare. Why do I even submit a poem in the same contest as you, I will never know. This is preciously romantic.
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Thank you dear. You are always so thoughtful.
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Thankyou for your submittal, Bella
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I feel your very heartbeat within my chest
Dreams of your angel's face has become my breath
these two lines are what keep me holding on to faith that a certain someone will one day make me his valentine. thank you for sharing this with me and i wish you the best of luck in this contest which we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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Oh thank you for such kind words. And I hope that for you too.
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It's sounds like one of those amazing poems they put in the Hallmark cards, only better. You should start your own card chain bussiness
Lol, this was amazing! Great write 
~Ryan~
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Thank you Ryan. Not sure I would make it in Hallmark option. I'd be most likely to revert back to my Candied Love version of poetry.
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Beyond Precious-
I had to find tissues first before reading this
Gorgeous verse You have penned Sweetness~
and the emotions definitely felt in the Heart~
from Yours to mine and back again...
Thank You for sharing this~
~sigh~
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings always
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thank you darling. You just need to thank yourself for the inspiration.
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Excellent
Oh now this was beautiful words !!! ... Your love would surely be proud !!! Well Done Daddy
Love Jackie
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Thank you sweetie. So glad you enjoyed it.
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Beautifully, beautifully written, my friend! I know your angel will love this as it's written with your heart!
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Awww. You're always so sweet in your comments. I didn't bother to mention her by name in this poem, since I can't imagine doesn't know who I'm talking about after all the poems we have both written.
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