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You

This is not about you
because you are just a three letter word
to me... now.

Huh, I guess it is about you.




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  • Luciferschild
    May 6, 2007

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    i hate to sound condescending but this poem was absolutely brilliant, it managed alot of emotional power in just 4 lines, i loved the approach it took, it made me think of a couple of things while laughing! very well written, but i am not surprised


  • mrsfoss
    March 29, 2007

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    Hi,Camlek:

    This is hort but is packed with a strong message and meaning,well done you talented poet you.



    msfoss


  • AceOSpades
    March 1, 2007
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    Mm

    I normally am never satisfied by shorter things... but this one is nice and memorable, probably due to it's simplicity... and yeah it brings curiousity... I wanna hear the story behind it... Very nicely done!


  • InterzoneTypewriter
    February 14, 2007
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    Intriguing

    Almost like a haiku. Definately conveys a strong feeling. What's it about? Love Jon x