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I want to be a person too!

Do you like my new tattoos?
Do you like my new piercing?
Do you really like my new appearance?
Do you care?
Do you care about me, beyond that?
Seriously you can tell me…
Can you be straight up with me?
Do you want to know what I think?
Of course you don’t, but I’m going to tell you anyway.
I think you’re just that shallow.

Please tell me what you think

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  • NicoleAlyce
    August 12, 2007

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    Hmmm. I think tattoos and piercings don't make the person, your character does. At least you are still writing though, I am happy to see that