DX you say you’re a simple man
But you didn’t have to prove it
Sounds like your rhyme’s written on the can
Which explains why your words are shit
Think you can use me, that you’re the boss?
You’re living in a dream
You can’t even use paste and floss
Your breath stinks when you scream
I have a big mouth I know that it’s true,
All the better to diss you with, all the better to diss you
So stop fantasising about my body
Even for you that’s far too shoddy
You’re supposed to be a teacher but to me you’re just a fool
Your rhymes might make it in the yard but you need to go back to school
You try hard but never seem to get into that groove
Maybe if you re-learn children’s songs your rhyming will improve
“Bo Bo Bo you’re rote
Crap rhymes were your theme
Merrily merrily merrily merrily
You’re living in a dream”
And as for “Mono on mono” that’s "the kissing disease"
If you’ve been kissing Ben I don’t want to hear it ... PLEASE!
Now I fight MANO-A-MANO in the real world
Not “sports entertainment” in gay costumes
I’m in a bar, round a neck my fingers curled
You’re gaily romping in a field picking blooms
My eyes may have bags ‘cause of no sleep and too much sex
Yours are just bloodshot from jerking while watching DX
You look up to Shawn Michaels? His name is Michael Shawn Hickenbottom
Was it you that gave him that hickey? I’m sure his ass tasted rotten
Seems the only thing you learned from that asshole like a bucket
Is to get on your knees, pucker your lips, and then to gently suck it!
So give it up PT, or DX, or whoever the hell you may be
You’ll never be good enough to get within miles of me
And when your head’s spinning and your mouth is dripping drool
Remember that it’s TATTBOY who is the King of Cool
Author notes
A rebuttal to DX
A contest entry
- Freestyle Lyrics by James R.
800 points, ended February 19, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice job or your rebuttle!
Of, course I was expecting you to bite back good and hard, but I will not quit. You'll here from me soon. Especially when we enter round # 2,
Good write
Love the challehge
Bo
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I'm enjoying the challenge too
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Not bad man not bad
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Thanks James
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This was pretty good tatt
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Thanks Chief
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Scary
Touche! All i can say is Touche!
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Me? Scary?
Never!
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Hmmmmm ~rubbing chin~ - wonder if anybody that actually knows You will believe that statement
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I have to admit that I was surprised to hear the Vivienne (Predator's sub ) thought that I was scary!
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She did?! What in heaven's name made her think that?
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