Tree tops
Reaching above
The early morning mist
Touching the sun their only thought.
~Success~
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Hi, I liked this but was a little dubious about the word success, this is more a human sentiment, if a tree could think perhaps it would think more of surviving , just a personal thought, all the best in the comp, Di
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Good presentation. And it looks like a tree with my personal preferred centered placing.Thanks for entering and good luck.
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I love trees. Beautiful picture and write to match. Good!
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Beautiful!!!!!!!!!
spirit, The treetops soared high into the sky and reached that sun successfully with your wonderful words. I want to thank you for sharing this lovely piece with all of us and wish you the very best in the contest. Love and God bless, Joyce
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WOW!!!!
this is very good so much said in just a few lines...You have the mind of a tree,its only thought getting as close to the sun as it can...Just another way of life...
Tree tops,morning mist,touching the sun...
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beautiful
this is the perfect poem with the perfect image and the picture to match.... just lovely
df
good luck in the contest
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very nice, it goes really well with the picture
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Very beautiful and well written cinquain.
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