Sometimes I get so amazed
At the people who don't have a clue
Like saying you're going to hell
If you don't do what I do
Personally, I don't like church
It's just not the thing for me
That doesn't mean I'm a sinner
But they don't wanna see
Now I just look the other way
When they say I'm a mindless breeder
Because if I wanted to be a Christian
I'd just play follow the leader.
Author notes
I'm quite proud of this one actually...
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- Blaspheme by Flightless Raven.
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Cute
this was cute,... i liked your rhyme scheme, though it seems as if you didn't even try..it was done effortlessly, and you should be proud.
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Oooh, I liked it. Especially the ending.
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