My sins arise in many a form yet I do not fear
For God is His own, and cannot be moved by your words
You are the people for whom sin was created
The gate of Heaven is aligned in your book to fit your needs
Yet these needs are not up to you
You do not decide who shall strive or fall
The world of death is not held in your palm
My sins are to be judged by Him and not yourselves
For no matter how many "wrongs" I accomplish the choice is not yours
The fate is not yours
For this bond is between me and the Lord
Your ideas on love are one sided and strike no truth
For man created the bible
And man chooses the fate of marriage without the Lords consent
Man chose for marriage to stay with two opposites
God has not chosen, and none shall know his side
Not until the untimely day of their death
When nothing can be done
No one can say whether the Lord expects you in church
No man can say whether your religion is right or wrong
Only the Lord
Until the day of a modern Moses may we be led to what we know is right
Or what we won't admit is wrong
I leave my soul in the hands of the Lord
And no mortal man may judge my unworldly fate
Author notes
I firmly believe that religion is a persons own opinion. I find myself unable to attend any church, since most only bash on other religions, beliefs, and lives.
God will be the one to determine what is right and wrong, I do not believe that my beliefs, for the fact I do not go to church, will cause me eternal damnation.
I believe I will be judged by what I have done in life over how many days I spent in church.
A contest entry
- Blaspheme by DepravedDeprived.
450 points, ended February 14, 2007, 9 entries
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This is good. I felt like I could relate to what you were talking about when you wrote this poem. I hope to read more of your poems and I hope that you keep up the good work
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this was a unique depiction of the guidelines i stated, you did well by staying inside of them, and yet you went so far outside of the box... i like it, keep up the good work.
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Lovely. "And no mortal man may judge my unworldly fate" I loved your poem. Very good write. I felt the same way once...now...I just don't care as much.
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Thank you so much for your comment! I know what you mean...sometimes I just get too tired to argue with ignorant people.
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I'm glad you brought the marriage factor into this... Not a lot of people like that.... And I love the fact that you made a point of saying man wrote the book not God. Claps to you dear!
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Thank you! I have to say I am very very very, strong about this topic. I had fun writing what I feel about!
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