Around me I see fields of green
and bubbling streams of foamy white.
Holding your hand I walk along.
Darling with you, what a wonder sight.
We walk through the meadows
with wild flowers all around,
as gracefully you gather them,intertwining,
Creating for me a beautiful crown.
Now, your princess, I flash a smile,
As you take a bow.
Not sure why I feel like this.
Not sure quite how.
Running in the sunshine,
still holding your hand.
This world is so perfect
for this girl, and this man.
Sweet perfection,
stunning light from above.
We stand in the warmth
of the sun and our love.
As the sun sets
we sit by the lake.
Our toes in the water,
we'll remember this place.
This place where we announced
our undieing love.
Oh the bliss that you've given,
like a gift from above.
Sit with me darling,
just a little bit longer.
Run your fingers through my hair.
All the while, My love grows only stronger.
A contest entry
- TAKE ME AWAY!!! by Whyitt U.
900 points, ended February 18, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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God, I could sure go for a day like this right now!!! Freezing cold and piles of snow coming down...
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i liked this poem. it really speaks out to you. thank you for your words. this poem was great.
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That's so sweet...
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You have truly taken me away. I can see this place, and you, and your beautiful crown. "we stand in the warmth of the sun and our love"...the ice and snow have melted
I would sit there with you as long as you wish...Thank you for this perfect day (in the sunshine with you)
I love this poem. Great job!!! Good Luck!!!
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