I leave you two red roses
For it is time for us to part
One rose is my love
The other is my heart
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Scarlet kisses and applauses!
*crying non-stop* Omgoodness! This was beautiful!!! I never get small poems but this was powerful! I do not have a favorite part as this is complete and whole in its perfection. I sit shaking my head at how wonderous this really ways.
Thank you for writing so vibrantly beautiful.
Lady Blue~
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awww oh my goddess! that just made me do that
it was so powerful in such a brief read. that one really hit me in the heart. *tear* funny how something so simple can have such an impact.
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Very deep emotional little poem..True love never dies..It always stays in our hearts..fantastic poem my friend..
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This is very powerful, dear heart. What watered them, what called them to rise and blossom, will hold them in a dried dying bouquet.....powerful write, yet again...... I
you and your gentle dear release.
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SO SAD
This is so touching and brings much emotion with it:Two red roses, time to part,one is my love the other is my heart...Its so easy to read and feel.
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Beautifully done.
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perfect lines with photo
beautifully done thank you for sharing -
Such a sad but beautiful write you have here. Always hard to let go, but you did it with such sweetness. Great work here my friend!
Jeremy0826
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