the glass-tinted
ink framed her eyes
somehow
.
(knocked me over)
she dropped me,
bloodied
stain on my lip,
left me hanging over
visions of
trauma
induced by
desire
lashes fluttering,
merge me with glass
lips and
hush-hush
fingertips, curled
.
.
blotched with lithium
stitches and the siege
of a frail hand
Author notes
option one
A contest entry
- ♥Wordbank and titles contest♥ by OurxBeginning.
500 points, ended March 25, 2007, 41 entries
Honorable mention
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This is very emotion filled and deep. I liked the length of this, I think it fits with everything well. Nice use of the words, thanks for entering and good luck. ~
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this was a great write...the flow was smooth to your poem and your words were strong, powerful and very emotional your very talented keep writting and good luck in our contest
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great write..your very talented...this was short but sweet and very well written..keep writting your great at it! thanks for entering our contest and good luck
~Chrissy~
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