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My Complex Simplicity

I was born scared,
terrified of this world,
trapped by my own body.

I discovered religion,
lost it when I found truth,
and realized my spirituality.

I understood my family,
who never meant to hurt me,
but didn't know how to help themselves.

I even found myself,
though I didn't know who I was,
& I've been searching ever since.

How have you felt & do you understand?

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  • esroddo silver member
    November 27, 2007

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    Some times we seem to feel lost and like we don't belong. Its from lack of guidance and understanding of life. Or we try to live up to the expectation of others, to be excepted.
    But we really need to just fine the light in our lives to guide us in our beliefs. To fine peace in our hearts. Because it something we have decided its right. Not what others what or expect of you. This is a beautiful write of what you have felt and what you have found in life. Well enjoyed I made me feel like you found that light that you have been longing for so long. LISA



  • thankful4theSuNsEt
    February 11, 2007

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    wow...this is awesome! dripping with hope, but so sad with what it's meant to say...i love it. espec. that last bit about finding yourself and searching ever since. i like the style too. great piece!


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    February 11, 2007

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    A very nice piece although sad in its content. A great flow and style. Very well done.
    Soulful Woman