LOVE IS AN ILLUSION,
ITS ONLY IN DREAMS.
PEOPLE FALL FOR IT AND FOR WHAT?
[[HAPPINESS]]...
NO, SADNESS, INCOMPLETNESS
THEY THINK IT WILL HELP THEM IN LIFE..
BUT NO IT ONLY TEARS THEM DOWN.
DEEPER AND DEEPER UNTIL LIFE ITSELF FEELS LIKE ITS WEARING AWAY.
IT ONLY MAKES THEM HAPPY FOR AWHILE,
AND THEN LOVE ABANDONS THEM, LEAVING ONLY A BROKEN HEART
THEN AWHILE LATER THEY MEET UP WITH LOVE AGAIN
IT WILL BE DIFFERENT THIS TIME THEY SAY
AND THEN WHAT?
[[HAPPINESS]]...
NO, SADNESS, INCOMPLETNESS
THE SAME PATTERN CONTINUES AGAIN AND AGAIN
UNTIL THEY BREAK.
NO MORE THEY SAY...
IM DONE WITH LOVE.
AND THEY FEEL LIKE THEY WANT TO GIVE UP ON LOVE FOREVER.
THEN SOMEONE SAYS YOU WILL MOVE ON.
THEY SAY WHAT?...
[[HAPPINESS]]...
NO SADNESS, INCOMPLETNESS
FINALLY THEY HAVE LEARNED LOVE IS NOT FOR THEM,
JUST NOT MEANT TO BE.
GIVE UP THEY SAY, IM DONE WITH LOVE.
AND THEN WHAT?
[[HAPPINESS]]...
YES, NO MORE SADNESS OR INCOMPLETNESS
THEY ARE HAPPIER WITH NO LOVE AT ALL
THEY MAKE IT JUST FINE ON THERE OWN
FOR THE FIRST TIME THEY FEEL...
[[HAPPINESS]]
Author notes
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DON'T BE FOOLED BY CHARM. LOVE IS NOTHING BUT HURTFUL. ALTHOUGH I DO BELIEVE THAT SOMEDAY EVERYONE FINDS A MATCH IF ITS MEANT TO BE BUT IT WILL STILL HAVE ITS FAULTS AND PAIN. BUT IF YOU JUST SIT BACK IN LIFE AND HAVE FUN THE CHANCES ARE YOUR LIFE WILL BE A LOT EASIER. I WROTE THIS FROM EXPERIENCE. DON'T GET TO ATTACHED TO LOVE. CHANCES ARE YOUR HEART WILL GET BROKEN.
I WROTE THIS WHEN I WAS GOING THROUGH A TOUGH BREAK UP. ME AND THE SAME PERSON DECIDED TO GIVE LOVE ONE MORE CHANCE WE ARE A LOT HAPPIER AND EVEN THOUGH AT THE TIME I BELIEVED EVRYTHING I WROTE IN THE POEM AT THE TIME I RELIZED THERE IS SOMEONE FOR EVERYBODY AND EVEN THOUGH ME AND THAT PERSON WENT THROUGH A HARD TIME TOGETHER IT WORKED OUT IN THE END AND THATS HOW LOVE WORKS!
iLy. WESLEY!
A contest entry
- I'm not an addict it's cool, I feel Alive by CrimsonxxMachete.
425 points, ended February 15, 2007, 14 entries
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Comments
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I disagree. There is beauty in love, and there is beauty in pain. Take this poem for example. You wrote a gorgeous masterpiece when you were in pain. It just depends on your outlook in life. If you live to pick out every little thing wrong with it, then of course love will just be pain. But if you live to search and see the beauty in the most evil things, then pain will become love.
Great work here. I could really feel some emotions going. Keep it up.
Love,
Marisa
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Wise words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
These are indeed very wise words, but I am a firm believer in love although I have no one in my life right now, but I am done with love until the right one comes along. and I just know that when he does I'll know right away and I trust God that he created someone just for me. You see I'm not looking for the same things I did when I was younger, I though you had to have passion right away. Next time I fall I'll get to know this guy first really know him. But your poem does serve a purpose and that is to warn after one, two, three, rushed loves and broken hearts it is time to give up if only for a season...Great job on this. I am glad i read it!!!!!!!!Thanks for sharing!!!!!Toni -
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I know it must hurt. You know and in a way your so right its scary. There seems to always be a great deal of pain. But you know what? If its right, all that hurt is worth it. At least, I hope so. And I know you woulnd't trade those memories with him, so you just have to look back on it as a good thing, and keep looking forward. If destiny suits you well, then its incrediably possible that your other heart will find you. If you know what I mean. Really cool poem...i like the fact it didn't ryhme or anything it made it unique.
-Kali-
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THANK YOU KALI! I LIKE THIS STYLE OF WRITING TOO! AND I THINK I WILL STICK WITH IT FOR A WHILE
AND TO ALL THOSE WHO ARE READING THIS KALI IS RIGHT ALL THE HURT AND PAIN IS WORTH IT! 
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