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Lyrics Poem

Its the onlyway to live in cars.
Saying play that funky music white boy.
wait turn the beat around.
we can dance if we want to.
everybody dance now.
I called 867-5309 but you werent around.
These days are our's these happy days.
I'll stop the world and melt with you.
Its my life. and Im wanted dead or alive.

Author notes

These are mainly songs from the 70's and 80's that I took lyrics from an wrote this. was fun.

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  • Andi. gold member
    April 1, 2007
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    tee hee too cute
    good job will

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  • Grin
    March 6, 2007
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    I know all of em

    coolness.

    um, aren't these a bit earlier than your musical time?
    but Im glad to remember them. Cute idea. I admit the opening line was enticing---hence here I am checkin' out the whole thing.

    Keep writing keep writing keep writing

    Someday you'll be famous, don't forget me then!!!!


  • Asylaarix
    March 2, 2007

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    This was too cute ... I giggled when I read it ... good job hun ... it was cute as hell ... just like you ... love ya lots and see ya around i'm sure ...


  • Lady-Pegasus
    February 13, 2007

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    COOL, these are the songs i grew up with so it was fun to see them on here. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.


  • blueyez
    February 11, 2007
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    That's really cool how you took lyrics and made a write that made sense! Much props Sir Will!


  • saseychik0688
    February 11, 2007
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    this is different will but i like it alot


  • Lady in Love
    February 11, 2007
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    Cool poem...very creative I like it!

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