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♥X Candy Covered Roses X♥



&& You walked away
With nothing to say
With candy covered roses
And a bottle of champaign 
You said it was for me
And that you were leaving me

I cried and shook my head
And just made myself believe that you were dead
You took your time
In asking me for mine
You had no other lines
So I said yes of course
I took my time
Wishing that your were never mine
I made up my mind
To never again cry.


&& You broke my heart
Turning it into lost fragrances
You pushed me away
Like a stripper that you had to betray
I lost my mind
And never again said that you would become mine
I walked away
With nothing that could make my day
I still have them candy covered roses
Green as fresh cut grass on a hot summer day
I put them in a vase
And sat them on my window seal
Wishing someday
They would die, just as I hoped you would to
I never had to lie
And never cried
But after you
I wasnt fine
This thing called my ♥
Had started to tear apart
I wished for that day
To say please God make him stay away.
Ive been tring so hard
To make a new start
And to forget that day
That you crushed my heart.
Believe you me
I have nothing else to say.



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  • February 11, 2007

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    Very very very well written! I loved it! You did a fantastic job and it flowed very well. It all went together perfectly! I love the pic too! Thank you for sharing such art!

    Amy

  • GabbyAbby
    February 11, 2007

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    Terrific!

    Wow I really love this poem! I know exactly how that feels and you decribed it very well. You're a great writer!

    • February 11, 2007
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      thanks! <3♥


      ♥ Lucin ♥