So very near and yet so far
Each night I wish upon a star
For you to be here in my arms
Seducing me with all your charms
Although I've never seen your face
I wish to feel your warm embrace
To be with you and see you smile
Would constantly make life worth while
In my dreams I always find
It’s you I can’t get off my mind
My love for you I can’t deny
I simply cannot tell a lie
I feel it in my heart and soul
You are the one that makes me whole
I’m sure to find if I persist
The day that you and I exist
Author notes
Option 2
A contest entry
- February New Member's Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended March 14, 2007, 76 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Internet Love by joleahe.
600 points, ended June 23, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Welcome to AP
Very nicely done! The encouragement and warmth can be felt throughout each line! Thank you for sharing and welcome to all poetry! Wish you the best! -
Welcome to Allpoetry
This is excellent. So hopeful.. lively and cheering. Thankyou so much for the entry.. this poem has touched me in a very personal way.. thanks for the entry dear. Thanks for following the rules as well. Good luck in the contest
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Ahh...sweet!
What I love most here, is that it isn't an actual love existing presently. It is a love that is being longed for! A love we all dream and hope to get. I like that you talk as though this person is already out there, and you're just waiting for the moment when time allows you two to meet. A hopeless romantic? We all should be.
*R
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This would make a nice greeting card variety. It stands for a timeless appeal.
Very nice. The end is very catchy.
Thank you so much for entering and I wish yout he best.
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wow you are an amazing poet that was fantastic I love the first stanza and the last exspecially the last it makes me think of what I want to say to this girl I know great job it was fantastic
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i love this one! the words can be made personal to me because i have someone that i really care about who lives in spain and we can be together but he's coming in march and this poem reminds me of him!! well done <3
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Great job and I am glad to see that you followed the rules. I have found that sometimes a dream can be better then the real thing. I have also found the opposite to be just as true. I wish you luck and thank you for the entry.
Despair
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Welcome to AP
Very nicely done! Your heart speaks loud and clear of what it wants and what it needs! Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest! Welcome to AP!
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