O’ to live in a house . .
With indoor heating
Not a shack designed . .
For Buster Keaton
A house to look upon . .
. . With pride ! . .
Built for comfort
With the loos inside
Yes . .I must marry a man
With plenty of money
For midnight excursions
Are far from funny
I’m a pretty girl
That deserves the best
God! I wish I’d warn
A thicker vest .
A contest entry
- Let You Imagination Run Free #2 (picture inspired) by Kuranya.
600 points, ended February 14, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow
this was a great poem. you really put alot of thought in this great job. i think this is one of the best i've read today i read alot in one day sometimes i stay up over 24 hours and read and comment when i get a chance. thanks for giving me something good to read and it was very interesting thanks for sharing and god bless SIGN: DI.
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Outstanding. This one brings many visions to my mind, and many feelings to my heart. There is a bit of humor here, but also pain. Sometimes we have to use humor to get through the pain to get through life. Very deserving of the golden beauty. Congratulations!!
Sam
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This is fabulous.. I love the hilarity of it all, made me laugh, hard... well doneI thank you for taking the time to enter this contest and wish you the very best of luck
Karen
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This poem is hilarious and sweet, I liked it very much, especially the line:
A house to look upon . .
. . With pride ! . .
Built for comfort
With the loos inside
-->I hear ya
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I laughed as soon as I began reading this. So, so funny! And I adore the word, loo. It's so much more humorous than any americanism. Your imagination is showing!! Hee Hee. Fun write Albert. Love it. Peace, Rhonda
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